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But oh well, G right? In case anyone forgets, this IS from the show. This is not a custom vector, so don't bitch to me.
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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Awesome job for being your first vector; I took the liberty to show it to my partners at the VectorClub and they had the same impression than me: great work.
Certainly when we the time will come, we can accept you into the club. You already know a lot about how to vector, and the issues that I could spot are related mainly with some strokes that you will need to make sharper.
Here is a PNG version of your vector when I highlighted the issues that I could spot: [link]
Here is the color explanation:
- Red: Basically end points of the strokes that you will need to make sharper. This is a tutorial where you can find how to solve that little issues [link]
- Blue: Those are fill errors, like the one located below the cutie mark. That should only one stroke. [link] This is a tutorial about the nodes strokes of a vector.
- Green: Those are parts that aren't aligned properly... The nose stroke, eyebrow and eye should be aligned
- Black: is a fill error, a hair line that shouldn't exceed over the body stroke; and a section of the eyebrow that should be thicker to cover the section where the eyebrow details are placed.
The arrow is because the eye ball isn't rounded in that section.
The colors and other details are very well done, there isn't any other problem. Also you added highlights and the eye effect (gradient, etc) that is something rare to see in a first vector.
Awesome job... if you can fix that little issues I will send you a request to the VectorClub
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